November 15

My Elaborated Sentences

Boring Sentence:The girl got popcorn at the movies.

My new sentence: The cute girl got buttery popcorn with a large coke.

 

Boring Sentence:The fish swam in the sea.

 

My new sentence: The rainbow fish swam quietly and shyly in the sea.


Posted November 15, 2013 by lphan1 in category Uncategorized

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